What a 6.5 sounds like
I would like to talk about a group project that I did at university last semester in my marketing course.
We were a group of four students and our task was to prepare a presentation about a company and its advertising strategy. We chose a famous soft drink company because there was a lot of information available about it.
We divided the work between us. One person collected the information, another person made the slides, I wrote the text of the presentation, and the fourth member practised the speaking part with us. We met three times in the library and we also had a group chat on our phones where we shared everything.
In the end the presentation was very successful and our teacher gave us a high mark. Everybody did their part well and there were no problems in our group, because all of us were responsible students and good friends.
I enjoyed this experience very much and I learned that teamwork is very important for our future careers.
Why it scores what it scores
Well organised, appropriate length, and the division of tasks is clearly explained. The problem is the one the plan predicts: a group where everything worked has no story in it. Because nothing went wrong, there is nothing to narrate — no complication, no decision, no repair — so the answer stays in flat past simple and ends on the conclusion that teamwork is important, which teaches the examiner nothing about the candidate.