What a 6.5 sounds like
I would like to describe a meal that I had with my friends in a restaurant about two months ago.
We went to a Turkish restaurant in the centre of the city which is famous for its kebabs. There were five of us and we sat at a big table near the window.
We ordered a lot of different dishes. First we had some starters, such as hummus, yoghurt with cucumber, and warm bread which came directly from the oven. After that we had the main course: three of us ordered chicken kebab, one ordered lamb and one ordered a vegetarian dish with rice and vegetables. For dessert we shared baklava, which was very sweet, and we drank tea afterwards.
The food was delicious and the service was also very good. The prices were reasonable, so we paid about fifteen dollars each.
I enjoyed this meal a lot and I would like to go to that restaurant again with the same friends.
Why it scores what it scores: The vocabulary is good and the answer never stalls, which is why it clears 6.5 comfortably. But the plan asks for the occasion rather than the menu, and roughly half the answer is a list of what was ordered. Nothing is said about why the five of them were together, what was talked about, or what made that evening different from any other meal — so there is no story for the language to attach to.