What a 6.5 sounds like
My perfect job would be to work as a doctor, because I want to help people and to do something useful for society.
I learned about this job from my family, because there are some doctors among my relatives and I have always heard them talking about their work.
The work of a doctor involves examining patients, understanding what illness they have, prescribing the correct medicine and sometimes performing operations. Doctors also have to work with nurses and other specialists, and they must continue studying during their whole career because medicine changes very fast.
This job would be perfect for me because I am interested in biology, I like helping people, and I am a patient person. Also it is a respected profession with a good salary and job security, so my family would be proud of me.
That is the job which I think would be perfect for me.
Why it scores what it scores: Every bullet is addressed and the vocabulary is appropriate. The card asks for perfect, though, and this answer stays at the level of the job title: examining patients and prescribing medicine is what a doctor does in the abstract. The plan asks for an ordinary Tuesday in the job, and without it the reasons at the end — I like helping people, I am patient — are the ones every candidate gives.