What a 6.5 sounds like
I would like to talk about a plan which I changed a few months ago, in the spring of this year, when I was preparing for my summer holiday.
In the beginning I planned to travel abroad with two of my friends. We wanted to go to a European country for about two weeks and we had been discussing it since the winter. We looked at many websites, we compared the prices of flights and hotels, and we made a list of the cities we wanted to see and the museums we wanted to visit. We were all very excited about this trip and we talked about it constantly.
However, in the end I changed my plan because of the visa. The process was long and expensive and I did not get an appointment in time.
So my new plan was to travel inside my own country instead, and I went to the coast for one week with my family.
I felt disappointed at first but later it was fine.
Why it scores what it scores: The English is comfortable and all five bullets do appear. The pacing is the problem, and this card punishes it more than most: the original-plan bullet takes a third of the answer while the last two bullets — what the new plan became and how the candidate felt — get one sentence each. Five bullets in two minutes is roughly twenty seconds apiece, and setting the scene at length is what makes candidates rush the interesting half.