What a 6.5 sounds like
I would like to describe a tall building in my city which I like very much. It is a modern business tower in the centre of the city.
This building is about forty floors high and it is made of glass and steel. It was built about ten years ago and it is one of the tallest buildings in our city. During the day the glass reflects the sun and at night the whole building is illuminated with beautiful lights.
Inside there are many offices of important companies, and on the ground floor there is a shopping centre with cafes and restaurants. On the top floor there is a restaurant where you can see the whole city, but it is very expensive so I have only been there once.
I like this building because it is very modern and it shows that our city is developing. It is a symbol of our economic progress and many tourists take photographs of it.
That is the tall building I wanted to describe.
Why it scores what it scores: Clear and well sequenced, with reasonable building vocabulary. It stays at 6.5 because it describes the building in isolation — height, materials, what is inside — and the plan points out that a tall building is mostly experienced from the street beside it. Choosing to like it also costs the answer: praise produces modern, beautiful and symbol of progress, where criticism would have produced sharper, more specific language.