What a 6.5 sounds like
I would like to talk about a group project that I did at university last semester in my marketing course.
We were a group of four students and our task was to prepare a presentation about a company and its advertising strategy. We chose a famous soft drink company because there was a lot of information available about it.
We divided the work between us. One person collected the information, another person made the slides, I wrote the text of the presentation, and the fourth member practised the speaking part with us. We met three times in the library and we also had a group chat on our phones where we shared everything.
In the end the presentation was very successful and our teacher gave us a high mark. Everybody did their part well and there were no problems in our group, because all of us were responsible students and good friends.
I enjoyed this experience very much and I learned that teamwork is very important for our future careers.
Why it scores what it scores: Well organised, appropriate length, and the division of tasks is clearly explained. The problem is the one the plan predicts: a group where everything worked has no story in it. Because nothing went wrong, there is nothing to narrate — no complication, no decision, no repair — so the answer stays in flat past simple and ends on the conclusion that teamwork is important, which teaches the examiner nothing about the candidate.