What a 6.5 sounds like
Traffic congestion is one of the biggest problems of modern cities. Some people believe that governments should spend their money on public transport, while others think that building new roads is a better solution. In this essay I will discuss both opinions before giving my own.
On the one hand, there are many advantages to investing in public transport. Buses and trains can carry a large number of passengers at the same time, so there are fewer cars on the streets. Public transport is also cheaper for ordinary families, especially for students and old people, and it produces less pollution than private cars, which is better for the environment and for our health. Furthermore, in many big cities the metro is much faster than driving during rush hour.
On the other hand, some people argue that new roads are necessary. When a city grows, the old roads become too narrow for the number of cars, and this causes long traffic jams every morning and evening. New roads and bridges can also connect villages to cities, which helps the economy and allows people to travel more easily. In addition, some places are too far away to be served by buses or trains. For instance, in my own country there are many small villages in mountain areas where no company would ever run a bus service, and for the families living there a good road is the only realistic way to reach a hospital or a university in the nearest city.
In my opinion, governments should invest in public transport, because it is cheaper, cleaner and can move more people than private cars.
Why it scores what it scores: Both views are covered fairly and the opinion is consistent, so this is a solid discuss-both-views script. It stays at 6.5 because every claim is a generalisation the reader already agreed with before reading it: buses carry more people, cars pollute, cities grow. The plan names the one fact that decides this essay — induced demand — and without it the road paragraph has nothing to answer, so the conclusion is a preference rather than an argument.