What a 6.5 sounds like
There is a debate in many countries about the right age for children to begin their school education. Some people say children should start as early as possible, while others think that seven is a better age. Both sides have good arguments.
On the one hand, starting school early has several benefits. Young children learn languages very quickly and their brains are like sponges, so this is the best time to teach them reading and writing. In addition, at school children meet other children and learn how to share, how to wait for their turn and how to solve small conflicts. Another important point is that both parents usually work nowadays, and if the child is at school the parents can go to their jobs without worrying, which is very important for the family income.
On the other hand, other people believe that small children should stay at home until they are seven. They say that childhood is very short and children should enjoy playing instead of sitting at a desk. Moreover, some children are not ready and they can become stressed, lose their confidence and start to hate school from the beginning, which is a very bad result. For example, my younger brother could not read as quickly as the other children in his class when he was five, and although he reads perfectly well today, for years he told everybody that he was simply not clever, which was not true at all.
In conclusion, both opinions have advantages and disadvantages, and I think the best age depends on the child and on the family situation.
Why it scores what it scores: A fair, readable discussion of both sides with reasonable ideas on each. Two things hold it at 6.5. The strongest paragraph argues for early school on the grounds that parents work — which is an argument about childcare, not education, and the essay never notices the difference. And the conclusion declines to answer: it depends on the child is a position only in the sense that saying nothing is.