Linking words feed the Coherence & Cohesion criterion (25% of your IELTS Writing score) — but the band descriptors reward natural, varied cohesion, not a checklist of connectors . Use a range of devices (referencing, substitution, and linkers) appropriately; over-using "Firstly, Moreover, In conclusion" on every sentence actually lowers band 7+. Aim for flow, not fireworks.
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What Coherence & Cohesion really marks
Coherence is whether your ideas are logically ordered and easy to follow; cohesion is how you connect them. The criterion explicitly penalises mechanical or overused linking. A band-8 script uses cohesion you barely notice; a band-6 script bolts a connector onto the front of every sentence.
The cohesion tools (beyond "linking words")
- Logical connectors — for sequencing and relationships: however, as a result, in contrast, for instance, therefore. Use them where the logic needs them, not by default.
- Referencing — pronouns and determiners that point back: this trend, such measures, these groups, it. This is what most band-6 writers underuse, and it's the fastest upgrade.
- Substitution & ellipsis — avoiding repetition: "Some support the policy; others oppose it."
- Paragraphing — a clear central topic per paragraph is itself a cohesion device. One idea per paragraph, signalled by a topic sentence.
Use them naturally — a before/after
Overdone (band 6): "Firstly, cars cause pollution. Moreover, cars cause traffic. In addition, furthermore, cars are expensive. In conclusion, therefore, cars are bad."
Natural (band 7+): "Cars are a major source of urban pollution, and they also clog city centres at peak times. Beyond these environmental and practical costs, owning one is increasingly expensive — which is why many city dwellers are reconsidering car ownership altogether."
Notice the second version uses referencing ("these… costs"), natural connectors ("and… which is why"), and varied sentence structure — not a connector per sentence.
A simple rule of thumb
- One clear linker per idea-shift, not per sentence.
- Prefer referencing and substitution to repeating nouns or stacking connectors.
- Vary your connectors — don't repeat "Moreover" three times; and avoid memorised over-formal chains ("Firstly… Secondly… Moreover… In conclusion").
- Read it aloud — if it sounds like a list of connectors, cut some.
Practise with feedback
Coherence & Cohesion is hard to self-assess. Write timed essays and get a per-criterion breakdown that flags mechanical or missing cohesion with IELTS writing correction. Pair this with the Task 2 essay types guide and the band scores guide to see how the four criteria combine.
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