What a 6.5 sounds like
I would like to talk about my cousin's wedding, which took place last summer in my hometown. It was a big event and about two hundred guests were invited.
The wedding was held in a garden restaurant outside the city. There were lights in the trees, a lot of food, and a band that played traditional music. All the family came, including relatives I had not seen for many years.
Everyone at the wedding was smiling. The bride and the groom were smiling, the parents were smiling, and even the children were happy and running everywhere. I think everyone was smiling because a wedding is a happy occasion and people were glad to see each other after a long time. It was one of the best days of last year and I will always remember it.
Why it scores what it scores: All four bullets are covered and the answer is easy to follow, which is enough for a 6.5. The trouble is the crowd is described as a mass — everyone was smiling, three times, with no individual in it. The fourth bullet is the one carrying the marks because it asks for a reason, and it gets the reason a wedding is happy, which the examiner already knew before the candidate opened their mouth.