What a 6.5 sounds like
It is often argued that only politicians can prevent damage to the global environment, because ordinary people are not able to do anything significant. I completely agree with this opinion for the following reasons.
Firstly, governments have the power to make laws, and laws are the only thing that can force companies to change their behaviour. A single person cannot stop a factory from polluting a river, but a government can close that factory or give it a heavy fine. Similarly, only a government can build a metro system, invest in solar energy or sign an international agreement about carbon emissions. These are the actions that really make a difference on a global scale.
Secondly, what individuals can do is very limited. Of course, people can recycle their plastic bottles, turn off the lights when they leave a room, use public transport instead of their car, and avoid plastic bags when they go shopping. These are all good habits and we should teach them to our children. However, if one person recycles and a factory releases tons of chemicals every day, the effect of that person is almost zero. Therefore individual efforts are not enough to solve such a huge problem.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that the responsibility for protecting the environment lies mainly with politicians, because they have the power and the resources, while individuals can only make very small changes in their daily lives, and it is the government that must lead this fight.
Why it scores what it scores: Organised, accurate and firmly positioned, so Task Response is satisfied — this is a comfortable 6.5. What it never does is disagree with anything. The prompt hands the candidate a claim and the essay agrees with it twice, and the second body paragraph is the recycling list the plan tells you not to write. The result is an essay that argues for the position the examiner assumed you would take, at length.